Yomiel's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Chalice of Marfa]

Pretty damn awesome for your first game.
two things that really bothers me though... one that "layton" is a tag, other than "puzzle", and the fact that i have to miss a puzzle's answer on purpose in order to get a medal...

BoobMarley responds:

Games aren't about medals, pal, and they're especially not about ones Yomiel thinks she deserves for clicking on a few things.
Secondly, if you don't think a puzzle game inspired by Professor Layton merits being tagged with "Layton", go make your own. :)

[The Relaxing Shore]

Hmm. You could add footstep sounds for sand and water. I don't know how Unity works, but, if it is similar to UDK, it should be possible. Asides from that, I love the song and the way you applied the sea sound effect.
The textures are well tiled, except maybe for the barrels. The sand and sea look a little bit unrealistic compared to the rocks. No idea what to do about the sea, but I think a lightmap or shadowmap would help on the sand; It doesn't seem to have any shadows falling on it except for the terrain mesh shadow.
The 3d models themselves are pretty good! Imo, the pier could be a little less Rustic, and the bananas... You could add a few trees, or put things belonging to the player(camera) around them. Scattered on the ground are a little bit out of place, since no trees at all are around.
(3.5 review rating, score 3.)

Puffycheeks responds:

Yomiel, thank you for taking the time to look at my submission. In the game engine the shadows do work but I can not figure out why they are not there when I export to HTML. I am still very much a beginner at scripting so there are some things I can not do. I will however take your rustic opinion and trees into consideration.

[Maximum Frustration 2]

I was thinking "nah, it can't be so frustrating."
first 4 levels were "okay, this is not so hard at all."
then level 6. "NOW IT'S A MATTER OF HONOUR."

I'm seriously pissed off. took one hour and a half to beat the first and the second game.
But this was the objective. I just underestimated the title.
Sir, you're one hell of a motherfucker. In the good way. I got pissed, but enjoyed it at the same time.

Zapxo responds:

You were mistaken and paid the price, and finally regained your pride, congratulations.