Yomiel's Reviews

[The Chalice of Marfa]

Pretty damn awesome for your first game.
two things that really bothers me though... one that "layton" is a tag, other than "puzzle", and the fact that i have to miss a puzzle's answer on purpose in order to get a medal...

BoobMarley responds:

Games aren't about medals, pal, and they're especially not about ones Yomiel thinks she deserves for clicking on a few things.
Secondly, if you don't think a puzzle game inspired by Professor Layton merits being tagged with "Layton", go make your own. :)

[Angry House Escape]

You're supposed to write controls and tutorials in "instructions", you know. Also, a puzzle may be obvious to the creator, but not so much to the player. What hint do we have for putting bulldog teeth onto a minotaur? How are we supposed to know that you have to offer fruits for statues to give you keys? To make it worse, you can't give any fruit to any statues! Trial and error is NOT a good way of making games like these.
Too little hints and can't examine items.

[The Relaxing Shore]

Hmm. You could add footstep sounds for sand and water. I don't know how Unity works, but, if it is similar to UDK, it should be possible. Asides from that, I love the song and the way you applied the sea sound effect.
The textures are well tiled, except maybe for the barrels. The sand and sea look a little bit unrealistic compared to the rocks. No idea what to do about the sea, but I think a lightmap or shadowmap would help on the sand; It doesn't seem to have any shadows falling on it except for the terrain mesh shadow.
The 3d models themselves are pretty good! Imo, the pier could be a little less Rustic, and the bananas... You could add a few trees, or put things belonging to the player(camera) around them. Scattered on the ground are a little bit out of place, since no trees at all are around.
(3.5 review rating, score 3.)

Puffycheeks responds:

Yomiel, thank you for taking the time to look at my submission. In the game engine the shadows do work but I can not figure out why they are not there when I export to HTML. I am still very much a beginner at scripting so there are some things I can not do. I will however take your rustic opinion and trees into consideration.